Sunday, February 9, 2014

Please,forget me!


I looked at him,
he looked at me.
All that he said?-
Please, forget me!


Tryin' hard to convince,
he told me
it was not love,
Please, forget me!


Sitting beside him,
Blurred, seemed the world to me
And all could hear him say?-
Please, forget me!


I knew why he said,
all that he said to me
he was right , when he said-
Please, forget me!


Now, when i sit thinking
about him and me,
All that I remember
Please forget me!

10 comments:

Abhijit said...

am just too too too too too too too too too too too flattered and impressed with this poem!!!! i really wanna convert it into a song...plz plz plz do permit me!!!!

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annie said...

Awwwwwwwww :(

Anonymous said...

Dear, oh dear! You know what I wanna say... I wish you could get more positive now.. and hope YOU forget all of it! Move on gal!

annie said...

You write well..write often.I keep comin to your blog only to find nothin..

DArk /-\NgE! said...

good one..

Poonam Nigam said...

some new version of poem,absence of excessive thoughts and exaggerations..gr8 writing.u write really well.

Anonymous said...

Thanks for writing this.

Just another blogger said...

who's this..@nyx??

Anonymous said...

hey !

may be i was getting too much attached to your writing & had started expecting more .
Well someone very close to me had once told me that attachment is very dangerous & today i feel may be its right! .
well you write really very well

May be this is the last time i'l be reading your blog .Carry on with your wonderful work ,
through your writing i can guess one thing about u is that you have a very open & a mature mind.
wish you all the success & "HAPPINESS" in your life...

Bye

---ANONYMOUS